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雅思饼状图两天搞定!(2)

2020-07-13 14:54:40

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【见招】

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

【拆招】

主体段二

Expenditure on resources such as books had increased to 20% by 1991 before decreasing to only 9% by the end of the period. In contrast, the cost of furniture and equipment saw an opposite trend. This cost decreased to only 5% of total expenditure in 1991 but rose dramatically in 2001 when it represented 23% of the school budget. Similarly, the cost of insurance saw a rising trend, growing from only 2% to 8% by 2001.

【解招】

 

本段是对其余三项的描述,它们都是排名其次的对象。根据三个被描述对象的趋势变化,先写resources(e.g.books)的花费呈“先上升、后下降”的趋势,然后通过in contrast这一表示相反的连接词引出furniture and equipment“先下降、后上升”的相反趋势,前后对比。最后,通过similarly,引出占比例最小的insurance,该对象同为整体上升的趋势,用“短语类句型搭配非谓语”的语法结构,将数据描述清晰。本段的衔接和过渡非常自然,值得深入研究。

【句型积累】

 

1.先上升、后下降的趋势描述:A (had) increased +数据+时间before decreasing to+数据+时间

2.“对比”趋势的过渡句:In contrast, B saw an opposite trend.

3.先下降、后上升的趋势描述:B decreased +数据+时间but rose +时间when it represented+数据

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