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【见招】
The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
【拆招】 主体段二 | Expenditure on resources such as books had increased to 20% by 1991 before decreasing to only 9% by the end of the period. In contrast, the cost of furniture and equipment saw an opposite trend. This cost decreased to only 5% of total expenditure in 1991 but rose dramatically in 2001 when it represented 23% of the school budget. Similarly, the cost of insurance saw a rising trend, growing from only 2% to 8% by 2001. |
【解招】
| 本段是对其余三项的描述,它们都是排名其次的对象。根据三个被描述对象的趋势变化,先写resources(e.g.books)的花费呈“先上升、后下降”的趋势,然后通过in contrast这一表示相反的连接词引出furniture and equipment“先下降、后上升”的相反趋势,前后对比。最后,通过similarly,引出占比例最小的insurance,该对象同为整体上升的趋势,用“短语类句型搭配非谓语”的语法结构,将数据描述清晰。本段的衔接和过渡非常自然,值得深入研究。 |
【句型积累】
| 1.先上升、后下降的趋势描述:A (had) increased +数据+时间before decreasing to+数据+时间 2.“对比”趋势的过渡句:In contrast, B saw an opposite trend. 3.先下降、后上升的趋势描述:B decreased +数据+时间but rose +时间when it represented+数据 |
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