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首战115:仅看开头就能得满分!【技术帖】

2020-07-12 09:25:54
Prejudice
Prejudice是一对双胞胎,她们还只是高中生,但一战托福就以115分的高分顺利分手!两位高分考神强烈推荐大家以一种全新的开头,征服托福考官,为你的的写作满分保驾护航~ 究竟,这全新的开头是什么呢?听本帖一一道来!

A good beginning is half the battle,soldiers!
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我对自己的要求是“fancy and novel”。国际形势科技发展什么的已经泛滥成灾老生常谈了,要达到“STAND OUT”的地步,开头一定要新。

当然,这不是说让你考试的时候苦思一个不一样的开头, 平时要有各种花样开头,慢慢的就有一种与众不同的模版了。


而所有模板中,我们最向大家推荐的就是——

对话式开头~\(≧▽≦)/~啦啦啦



【栗子1号】

Movies and TV programs made in your own country are more interesting comparing to movies and programs made in other countries.

我国的电影或电视节目比其他国家的更加有趣。


I have just watched the latest Disney movie Frozen(冰雪奇缘), and I laughed my head off at the little snowman, Olaf,when he says it out excitedly how he wants to feel the heat in summer and get gorgeously tanned. Then I said to my twin sister who watched it together with me: “That is awesome. Why cannot our country make something brilliant like that?” Though Chinese film makers will explode at my comments, it is by all means the truth: movies and TV programs made in China are way behind those made from America. 

这个版本的开头就是 “对话式”啦,很多文章都可以采用对话式开头的。

【栗子2号】

In twenty years from now, students will not use printed books any more.

20年后,学生们将不再使用纸质书


“I really envy future students who will all use electronic books,”very frequently my desk mate says this to me, “They can get rid of the pedestrian paper books while I must face them every single day. It is unfair! ”“Well,” I give the same answer to her every time, “Cheer up, there is a great chance that they might still stick to printed books like you and me.” Though many have assumed, like my desk mate, students will all use electronic books in the future, I believe that they will still use paper books. 


这个情景是编的,很明显是不,但是还是很新的开头不是嘛,要点也点到了嘛~~


仔细观察一下,你会发现这两个开头其实是一个模版...但是对话的内容要编有意思一点,至少要像个对话的样子!就是有细节有口语词有情感有背景啦... 


对话式开头是不是很好套吶~

只要创造个situation就可以了,

多写几个后就妥妥地掌握了!

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大家最爱的模板:

There has always been a hot debate over ...【改写Statemet】Some people claim that...【对立面观点】. However, from where I stand on this issue, I utterly contend that ...【自己的观点】, (and on no account can its significance being ignored.)【说一个看上去很有质感的句子撑撑场面】


同样是:改写Statemetn-对立面观点-自己的观点,我们不妨套到一段对话中:


编造场景的好方法:两个人,走在路上/刚下课/刚下班/吃完饭/看完电影/周末的清晨/周末的夜晚...,探讨起了Question中的话题【改写Statemet】,“我”主动说出了本文的观点/ “ta提出了一个观点”,我赞同/ “ta提出了一个观点”【对立面观点】,我反驳.【自己的观点】

“Life imitates art far more than

art imitates Life.”

― Oscar Wilde



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